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    Wolfie
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    Hopes and Fears

    Post by Wolfie on Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:07 am

    wrote this a while ago, as to describe how fearful i am of being left. The majority of the time i express myself through other means instead of talking. This is the first time anyone but Bhan's read it. So yeah, comments please



    Even though you say

    "You'll be with me everyday"

    I can't help but think your going to be torn away

    From me and our dreams of having a life

    And of you eventually becoming my wife?


    You say that you love me

    You say that you care

    But sometimes I wonder if you'll still be there

    When the time comes, after many years of wait

    But I guess if you are then it must be our fate

    Yet in life there are no guarantees

    That your dreams will ever succeed

    And I guess deep down...

    That's what really scares me


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    Re: Hopes and Fears

    Post by TheLatterGoesDown. on Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:26 am

    Aaron, that was great. Very Happy

    Lots of people have felt that way, and that pretty much expresses it all in that one poem.

    Good job ^_^


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    Re: Hopes and Fears

    Post by Wolfie on Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:40 am

    Thank you Katie Smile


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    Re: Hopes and Fears

    Post by Sith Lord 13 on Sun Jul 18, 2010 8:01 am

    Aaron, that was amazing. You really did a great job of articulating what goes through many peoples' minds everyday.


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    Re: Hopes and Fears

    Post by Huascar on Sun Jul 18, 2010 9:49 am

    wow, this is pretty good.. I felt like connected with it I don't know :O
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    Re: Hopes and Fears

    Post by TravM on Sun Jul 18, 2010 4:15 pm

    Aaron, I don't know you too well but I must say you are an excellent writer. I've never felt the emotions that you express in the poem, but it felt very realistic and vibrant to me. Very good. Smile

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