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    Shal's Poetry

    Post by HellBent Sin on Thu Jul 22, 2010 3:38 pm

    Well I want to start writing poems again, but i haven't written any in like 2.5 years or so and don't kow if i'm any good or not. Here are a few I've written:

    1)

    I met a boy

    Who's showed me the world from a million miles away

    I've looked above thinking,

    Where do the stars come from?

    But now I think I know.



    I know a boy,

    He's all that I need.

    He helps me through it all.

    Because I can smile and I can laugh.

    Life takes a while but it's all worth the half.

    He's just an eyelash wish away.



    I said,

    "Hey, you know that song?"

    Well I'll play along.

    Who ever heard of false pretences?

    Perfection is not beauty,

    Its just liars with no future,

    But no one gives a damn.



    I know a boy,

    He's all that I need.

    He helps me through it all.

    Because I can smile and I can laugh.

    Life takes a while but it's worth the half.

    He's only an eyelash wish away.



    I stood there standing,

    With life on the landing.

    Just dreaming it all away.

    Maybe if I just close my eyes, make a wish and with a surprise,

    I might see you somehow.

    Tomorrows a word, yes it's absurd.

    But I'm only thinking of the future.



    I know a boy,

    He's all that I need.

    He helps me through it all.

    Because I can smile and I can laugh.

    Life takes a while but oh, it's worth the half.

    He's only an eyelash wish away...




    2)


    Cheap ass promises,
    Bull shit lies,
    Fuck you, bitch,
    I hope you die.
    Get a damn gun
    Or swing from a rope,
    Have some more pills,
    OD on dope.
    You screwed me over
    More than twice,
    You broke my heart,
    Was it nice?
    Here's an idea,
    Something new,
    You're not alone,
    I'm sick of you too.
    So take your leave
    And shut the door,
    I hate you,
    You fucking whore.



    3)

    As they sleep the noises creep

    No one hears them only me

    Only I hear me weep

    I try not to listen

    But they're there

    Waiting for me

    Hoping I would sleep

    So they could capture me

    And take me away

    Far away

    Away from everyone I love

    Away from life itself

    Down

    Far down

    Down under the ground

    With my voice gagged and bound



    4)

    You entered my heart and are now making your way around my veins

    I can feel the rush of you running round my body like my blood,

    Even to the end of my very fingertips I feel the way you are taking over me,

    Every piece of me I deliver to you, and even when my eyes flood,

    The dark, contaminated droplets are made of my love for you.

    The need of you still sits like a tempting, yet maddening and cancerous war,

    The craving of lying next to you, holding your hand and speaking to you,

    Drives me to the absolute edge, and I pray that I will see you once and forever more,

    And on my very last, shallow breaths, will I be breathing you.

    You entered my heart and are now making your way around my veins.

    I can feel the rush of you running round my body like my blood,

    All because I love you, from my very heart and soul,

    You infected me with your astounding toxin,

    My punctured heart, you made it feel whole,

    It feels, that you are my purifying oxygen

    And I love you.



    5)

    He takes me
    He shakes me
    He doesn't seem to care
    Such power
    Such might
    My dreams turn into dispair
    All I ever wanted
    Was what he could never give
    He talked of wars
    And all his whores
    Such callous remarks
    'I just took her heart'
    But did he ever think of me?
    Of course he didn't
    He never
    He wouldn't
    Because then he could never be free




    6)


    I entered his heart
    I drained his pitiful soul dry
    He was mine
    I had the power this time
    He was just another slave
    I used him
    Against his will
    He did things
    That he swore he never will
    I was the poison
    That ran through his veins
    I let his blood leak
    And so i put him to sleep



    THE END

    Those are all I could find, I'll post more if I ever start writing again =]




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    Re: Shal's Poetry

    Post by Maverick on Thu Jul 22, 2010 5:39 pm

    Damn this is pretty deep. I really hope you keep it up. Big thumbs up from me Shal (Y)
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    Re: Shal's Poetry

    Post by Blood on Thu Jul 22, 2010 7:15 pm

    I'm in love with the second one. Nice work.

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    Post by HellBent Sin on Fri Jul 23, 2010 6:57 am

    Thanks guys =] and I think I will keep it up even though I haven't written anything englishy or read a book in like 2 years
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    Post by Cpt. Barbarossa on Fri Jul 23, 2010 10:47 am

    Nice one honey... You should do some more Very Happy


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    Re: Shal's Poetry

    Post by Maverick on Fri Jul 23, 2010 3:08 pm

    It's okay by me, I haven't read a book since I was in school. Which was 2 years ago. I read and I have good vocabulary, but I don't have the patience to read an entire book. Good I like it so keep it up.

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